Well, you may be pleased to know that your editing assistance back during my work on the Angel fanfic is still having an effect. One of the honchos for this big local record swap meet has been after me to do some technical articles for their monthly newsletter, and I was working on that project earlier this week.
I wrote up articles for the first two months, and then as I always do, went over them several times for basic proofreading, and... then for how I could trim them to make them cleaner. Several words/sentences were indeed rearranged or deleted.
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Date: 2019-05-10 07:16 am (UTC)I wrote up articles for the first two months, and then as I always do, went over them several times for basic proofreading, and... then for how I could trim them to make them cleaner. Several words/sentences were indeed rearranged or deleted.
So there ya go!