A little redesign and Bones

[cactuswatcher]

After feeling so dead on Tuesday, I did much better on Wednesday. I'm into a passage I've been wanting to write for many years. I think the first part worked out very well. The last part seemed very confusing as I was writing it. I think I need to sit down this morning and instead of writing, redesign the place where the action takes place, describe it into the story a few pages back from where I am, adjust what I've already written and then go on writing. I doubt I'll get much advanced in the word count today

Bones was well written but looked horribly badly thought out, logistically questionable and structurally unsatisfying unless all you care about is a long winded way to keep Jack and Angela a possibility. Showed a lot of signs of a script that was too long, that got cut in some unfortunate places to save the rest.

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