A little redesign and Bones

[cactuswatcher]

After feeling so dead on Tuesday, I did much better on Wednesday. I'm into a passage I've been wanting to write for many years. I think the first part worked out very well. The last part seemed very confusing as I was writing it. I think I need to sit down this morning and instead of writing, redesign the place where the action takes place, describe it into the story a few pages back from where I am, adjust what I've already written and then go on writing. I doubt I'll get much advanced in the word count today

Bones was well written but looked horribly badly thought out, logistically questionable and structurally unsatisfying unless all you care about is a long winded way to keep Jack and Angela a possibility. Showed a lot of signs of a script that was too long, that got cut in some unfortunate places to save the rest.

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Comments

[masqthephlsphr.livejournal.com]

I don't know anything about Bones, but your writing process from yesterday sounds exciting and also familiar ("OK, this isn't working, I think I need to change the setting.")

Maybe we can talk writing shop at Xmas and bored SoulfulSpike80?

[cactuswatcher.livejournal.com]

SS80 likes to write also. She just has no time for it at all, lately. Her job is nuts these days. She has a dog for the first time in her life. Just like yours, her family has been busy providing her with new relatives she wants to see soon.

I'd like to meet the 23rd which is Saturday because I'm guessing that would be the day SS80 could spend the most time with us. But I'm not sure yet *I* can make it that day. We have some of the Tucson relatives coming up early for Christmas.

[masqthephlsphr.livejournal.com]

Just let me know. I'm pretty flexible, but need a bit of advanced warning because of car juggling.

; )

[cactuswatcher.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I won't get that many words today!